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「小铅笔会跳舞——优秀作文展示」宁甜萌《我想养两只狗》(2)




小铅笔会跳舞

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我想养只动物
【小铅笔会跳舞——我们班优秀作文展示】宁甜萌《 我想养两只狗》(2)







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邀请函

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亲爱的小朋友们:欢迎投稿哟!



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爱与陪伴

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《我想养小动物》选自部编版二年级下册第七单元语文园地,要求教师引导学生打开思路,鼓励学生充分说出想养小动物的理由,并且表达清楚自己的想法。

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《语文课程标准》明确指出:小学阶段应“培养学生倾听、表达和应对的能力,使学生具有文明和谐地进行人际交流的素养。”提高小学生口语交际能力,是实施素质教育的需要。因此我从以下三方面来制定本节课的教学目标。

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表达目标:结合“小明想养只小狗,但是妈妈一直反对”这个主题,学习“讨论”的方法。
倾听目标:参与讨论时能认真倾听,并能领会要点。
应对目标:能对他人的发言作出言语、态度上的回应。
教学重点我确定为:结合“小明想养只小狗,但是妈妈一直反对”这个主题,学习“讨论”的方法。

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这节课,我运用了思维导图,先带领学生把要养小动物的理由找出来,说服妈妈,让妈妈同意我养一只小动物。他们说得很开心,理由很充足。
我又把我们班级的学生的这节课变成了习作课,让孩子们把此次口语交际内容写成文字。我收集整理出来发表出来。请欣赏一下孩子们的创意作文展示吧!



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作品展

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小铅笔会跳舞
我想养两条狗
雷锋小学校二年级 宁甜萌



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如果我能养小动物的话,我就会养两条小狗,让它们陪伴我成长。所以,有一天,我这样求妈妈:“妈妈,我想养两条小狗。它们非常可爱、懂事、有趣。”

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第一只我想养雪白的贵宾犬,它非常黏人,而且还不挑食,给它什么它就吃什么。它有大大而乌黑的眼睛,四肢非常发达。

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第二只是又长又胖的柯基犬。它的耳朵是竖起来的,小小的脸蛋,长长的身子,特别可爱。还有,它的性格非常温顺,从来不咬人。这两条狗的一切事情就交给我吧!比如喂狗、遛狗等事情。
我想养两条可爱的小狗,让它们陪着我长大,度过快乐的每一天,为了有更多的时间照顾狗,所以我现在要好好学习,天天向上,每天半小时完成晚上的所有任务。不信,我可以去写一个看看。妈妈,我真的好想养一只狗,您就让我养吧!

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爱的奖励

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汤老师的话

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每个人的生命里都有一段艰难的旅程,但是别怕,坚持走下去,你的人生终将变得美好而辽阔。不管遇到什么,请始终记得:生活就是一只看不见的储蓄罐,你投入的每一份努力我们都能看得见。欢迎关注小作者的优秀作文展示!


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孩子,你的努力换来的是成功,你的汗水换来的是收获,你的勤学苦练换来的是美梦成真!
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你给自己一个高度,世界总会还你一个尺度。无论生活怎样,都不要忘记微笑,愿你成为自己的太阳,无需凭借谁的光。

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爱与陪伴

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